Sensitivity

Image Description: A woman leans against an old stove, clutching a pair of lacy red panties, with a lusty expression on her face. She has short brown hair and is naked except for her shiny black high heels. The camera looks up at her from the floor.

Caption: “Oh, God, sorry for knocking you over like that. I was just so...excited that you’re home.

“No, there haven’t been any...changes. I tried on as much as I could, but my skin’s just so sensitive now. Even stuff that should be really soft feels like...hot sandpaper. I just tried these panties, but it’s even worse when it touches my...you know. And that’s when you came in.

“Shoes? Oh, right, these, Well you saw how my feet were earlier, how they won’t go flat. These took some of the weight off my toes, and they actually don’t hurt to wear. I forgot I had them on, actually. Best shoes I’ve ever worn. They make me feel really...really good.”

“What? Sorry, I zoned out there. Did you learn anything at the lab?

“Oh. Well, I’m sure you’ll come up with something tomorrow. I...I think I can handle one more day.”

“Other effects? Well...I don’t know if it’s just the sensitivity or what, but...I’m feeling really...really horny. It’s so embarrassing to say, but I’ve...well, I’ve masturbated like twenty times since you left earlier. Twentyish, I guess...it’s easy to lose count as a girl. Like, do I go by the number of orgasms? It was so much easier to keep track as a guy. Just rub that hard, thick cock over and over on the head and shaft and cradle the balls just right until it spurts hot, delicious cum onto my tits and face, and...oh, oh God, I can’t believe...

“I’m sorry, I’ve just been thinking about dick so much today. At first I thought I just missed being a guy, but it’s not. It’s...I want cock. Need it. And I just thought, as long as I’m...like this, and you’re here, maybe you could let me use yours? Just...let me keep the shoes on, okay?”

Commentary: Hope you like having a more explicitly erotic one now and then.

Purity Spell: On the Fritz

Image Description: Two naked busty brunette women are in a shower. One is bent over, leaning against the shower wall, while the other is standing behind her in a doggy style position, with her hands on the first woman's hips. The standing woman is looking at the camera with an outraged look on her face, while the woman bending over has a more quizzical expression.

Caption: "Oh, god dammit!" Ted shouted.

"Ohh, why'd you stop?" Alice asked. "Wait, what's wrong with your voice? What's wrong with my voice?"

"That damn purity spell's on the fritz again. It's only supposed to go off when one of the kids tries to get it on!"

"I don't know why you got that installed," Alice said, hefting her firm, enlarged breasts. "It certainly doesn't make me feel pure."

"It's cheaper than paying for a grandkid," Ted replied. "Or it was before I had to call the socrcery technician every week."

"Well, he's not going to come out on a Sunday, and neither of us can go out like this, so you might as well go get the toys from my nightstand so we can finish what you started."

Commentary: The second Purity Spell caption! Darn over-the-counter magic never seems to work quite right...

TG Book Review: Transformed: MtF Body Transformation Punishment by M Wills

I've seen M Wills around a lot when I've been browsing for new TG content on Amazon. Transformed stuck out to me because after growing up in the '90s and reading a ton of Spells 'R' Us stories, I've got a soft spot for people being transformed in a mall setting. Transformed follows five male friends who upset the wizard proprietor of a mall magic shop, and end up transformed into pop-culture-inspired women with a ticking clock and some difficult obstacles on their way back to masculinity.

I generally enjoyed this story. It was a little short, as these one-off Kindle TG stories often are, and in the beginning I had a hard time keeping track of which character was which. They're given fairly broad personalities and we don't spend too much time with them pre-transformation, so I ended up going back to the beginning a few times just to remind myself who was who. As someone who's also writing a story about five transformed guys, I know the struggle.

Of the five transformations, I recognized the sources for three, which were pretty easy to identify. I couldn't place the other two, which might just mean I'm not familiar with the sources, or might indicate that they're a bit less specifically inspired than the others. Aside from one very specific actress reference, it'd be easy to imagine that this story is set in the '90s, since two of the significant reference characters would have been more recognizable then.

The transformations themselves happen a little too quickly for my taste, and it would have been nice to linger a bit more on some aspects of them. There's a character with some extra parts that don't really get enough attention.

There's a ticking clock to the characters' struggle, and a deceptively easy task for them to accomplish to recover their manhood. I won't give away the ending, but I thought the obstacles thrown in their way were generally pretty fun.

Overall, Transformed is a fun little book that'll resonate with you if you like a little bit of pop culture in your transformation stories, but it could have benefited from spending a little more time on most of the story elements. I look forward to checking out more of M Wills' books.

Purity Spell: Daughters

Image Description: A short-haired naked brunette girl in heels is pressed against a washing machine, legs spread wide, with her hands gripping the butt of a second naked brunette girl, also wearing one heel. At their feet is a pile of clothes, and both girls are looking toward the camera.

Caption:
Daria had it all figured out. Her overprotective father was going to be out of town for the week, her little brother was at a sleepover, and her mom was housesitting for her aunt. She'd finally have the opportunity to get Steve over and scratch their mutual itches in every room of the house.

When Steve arrived, they made it as far as the first floor laundry closet before giving into their urges. They fucked right there on the washing machine, and it was great, right up until Steve came...and came, and came, his dick shrinking with each spurt as his body changed—hips expanding, breasts growing, skin softening, all in a matter of moments, until he looked like he could be Daria's sister. That's when Daria's father appeared.

Looks like I was right to set up that purity spell," he said. "Welcome to the family, Steve. Or probably Stephanie, now. You two really should have listened to my warnings. Of course, now I've got to set up twice as many purity spells." He sighed. "Daughters."

Commentary: The Purity Spell is a concept I come back to now and then, the idea of a sort of Parental Control magic that punishes naughty children for being naughty. It's no Great Shift or Spells R Us or Swap Class, but I'm proud of it.